This poem is very naughty. But that is why I like it. I really like your short 4-liners. They are very simple, lyrical and entertaining!
Flattery will get you everywhere, dear Anon. From now on, you'll get more 4-liners.
this is a nice one!very tempting and makes me wish i was 'there some'!gives one a ... i like the way it leaves you wondering 'guess what next'...
Thanks, Novisi. As you know, the suspense bit is created by the brevity.
I think the force of this verse is in the second line: "sprinkling show crystals on the sand". Does it mean she was showing off her "things"?
Dear Devlin, why would you want me to kill your imagination? ;-)
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This poem is very naughty. But that is why I like it. I really like your short 4-liners. They are very simple, lyrical and entertaining!
ReplyDeleteFlattery will get you everywhere, dear Anon. From now on, you'll get more 4-liners.
ReplyDeletethis is a nice one!
ReplyDeletevery tempting and makes me wish i was 'there some'!
gives one a ...
i like the way it leaves you wondering 'guess what next'...
Thanks, Novisi. As you know, the suspense bit is created by the brevity.
ReplyDeleteI think the force of this verse is in the second line: "sprinkling show crystals on the sand". Does it mean she was showing off her "things"?
ReplyDeleteDear Devlin, why would you want me to kill your imagination? ;-)
ReplyDelete