This poem is very naughty. But that is why I like it. I really like your short 4-liners. They are very simple, lyrical and entertaining!
Flattery will get you everywhere, dear Anon. From now on, you'll get more 4-liners.
this is a nice one!very tempting and makes me wish i was 'there some'!gives one a ... i like the way it leaves you wondering 'guess what next'...
Thanks, Novisi. As you know, the suspense bit is created by the brevity.
I think the force of this verse is in the second line: "sprinkling show crystals on the sand". Does it mean she was showing off her "things"?
Dear Devlin, why would you want me to kill your imagination? ;-)
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