Saturday, August 28, 2010

The Mistake

Even in your silence,
I feel the vital sense –
the telling thrashing about
of your throbbing heart.
That is true love, no doubt.

Even behind the pretty eyes
that turn soulful and soft
each time you look at me;
and through your wordless signs
I feel your love, for sure.

*Poem written in my past for the wrong person.


  1. lol @ in my past, for the wrong person

  2. mistaken love? lol.
    but this shows an intense confession in just a few words. i'm sure the right person would love this.

  3. If a mistake can make you write this, then imagine the possibilities with the right person.

  4. Lovely poem, too bad it was at the wrong time, never a wrong person...

  5. Kwame Mensa-Bonsu29 August, 2010

    In of correction, bro...those wrong people, i mean. lol.

  6. still very honest feelings!


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