Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Eden

Nana Ama lies wakeful at night. She made loyal love to her handy hubby, Kobby, just 30 minutes ago. He’s fast asleep and basking in some paradise at the back of beyond. But Nana Ama is flushing and longing for her little girlie, Sena. She’s only person who has made her come in her whole life. And Sena creates heaven every time they make love. She looks sadly upon the blissful face of sleeping Kobby. Then, she turns over and reaches for her phone.

20 comments:

  1. Genius! Very appropriate title.
    I like Nana Ama. She maintains the highly necessary balance. Hopefully, nobody gets hurt.

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  2. Interesting one NY. Well, when it comes to issues of fidelity I don't think Nana Ama is doing the right thing at all.
    I know a similar real-life story from primary school involving a "happily married" gay man putting up the straight facade. The outcome was completely disastrous and heartbreaking.

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  3. Perhaps if Kobby did a better job, she wouldn't ve to go calling Sena. Men need to take the time in pleasing their women.

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  4. @ Anonymous why r u sayn Kobby is not doing a good job? You dont knw if Nana Ama got married so as to avoid all the pressures from her family abt settling down with a man and having kids.

    @ Mike definately someone will get hurt.

    @ N.Y for there to be a win win situation Nana Ama can suggest a 3some and that would make Kobby Happy and she will get she wants.

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  5. I think Nana Ama should be true to herself and husband and come out. She is just hurting herself and her husband. She is what she is.

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  6. B.O.N.T.I., you are a man after my very heart!
    A threesome is the fail-safe way out.

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  7. you mean the 'garden'?

    lovely place there!

    such choices i have no problem with.

    'God for us all' in the end.

    i love it like that!

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  8. I like the twists on sexuality and fidelity Nana Yaw. Most men - even those that do - will vehemently swear that their wives never would cheat. It would be interesting to hear from the same what they would do if the person their wife cheats with was/is a woman.

    On a lighter note - was the phone by any chance an iPhone? If yes then it would complete your Eden reference. Get it? Apple? Ok, ok, bad joke!

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  9. Kwame Mensa-Bonsu21 October, 2009

    Nana Yaw, you know me! As i always say avoid the exotic, go for the simple and you will be fine.Someone who such "experimentations" will never cross her mind! Ciao!

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  10. Nana Ama needs to tell her husband shes not sexually attracted to him.

    Nana Ama needs to tell her husband she is sexually attracted to Sena because Sena sends her to sex heaven everytime they do the things that lesbians do.

    Is Sena a unisex name? If yes,

    Nana Ama needs to explain to her husband that Sena is a girl.

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  11. Kobby needs to send his wife, to sex heaven, and nana ama should tell him exactly how she wants it.

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  12. Hmmm, homosexuality, infidelity and openness. As it is, most gays are on the down low/closet as they say.

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  13. Church for Nana Ama!

    A nice, comfortable, musty old confessional with a kind, listening and understanding ear across the screen door.

    Love and Peace for Nana Ama. (Perhaps I should specifically say non-lesbian, non-infidelity love for her.)

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  14. Nice piece. Im sure Kobby is running his mouth telling the boys he is the King of the Hill...the hill belongs to a Queen.

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  15. @Raine how is show gonna say that. go back a bit... what is Nana Ama doing with him in the first place? if there wasn't some connection or attraction they wouldn't have even gotten married or hooked up in the first place. Cos they definitely would have slept together b4 they go married... Unless she was forced.. dont like that word lets say pressured into getting married by her family. If that was the case she should have said something a long time ago, Instead she went on ahead and married the guy gave the guy false impressions on how she felt. that just means she's plain COLD.

    @Lucci I agree with you

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  16. B.O.N.T.I glad u see my point :-)

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  17. i kinda get nana ama she's managed to satisfy her needs without hurting a man she probably loves; only problem is she's going to end up hurtin him anyway;and probably sena as well.

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  18. So is Nana Ama only with Sena because she's able to make her come or is she genuinely attracted to her? If Kobby was able to make her come would that mean she would quit her trysts with Sena? Would this then make her bi-sexual or a heterosexual who wants to come by any means necessary? Lots of questions!

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  19. uhm...bisexual tendencies? bicurious?lesbian? straight or just a pretender? oh well...

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