Tuesday, February 10, 2009

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If I walked through your eyes
To where the moon flies
And I kissed you on the lips
Till when the sun dips
If I swore upon a rose
Until my voice froze
Would you believe that I love you?
Would you say you love me too?

4 comments:

  1. Guess who...10 February, 2009

    well now, that's more like it! earlier stuff, less jaded, more hopeful. though, i hate to break it to you - love does not necessarily beget love.

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  2. Guess Who, the-now Me know that love is not always requited. It still feels good to be able to re-live moments of the past through these lines.

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  3. wow!
    sweet one there!
    but please don't assume the position of the 'persona' unless you have the room to handle the many lips that come yearning!

    nice one!

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