Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Trick Call

She called him at the mid of night
And whispered all in fright
She sobbed and begged him to get her
Ending in sigh and purr

He stopped a distance from her flat
I think he smelled a rat
He saw her smile when once inside
And knew that she had lied

28 comments:

  1. If she has to lie just to get some, then she's probably crap at it! Hehehe.

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  2. Lmfao. Maybe she wants to get with just him, no?

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  3. Interesting...love your rhyme and all...

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  4. Nana Yaw, still maintain she's no good. Or we all know he'll be running over on his own accord.

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  5. Point not considered before, but now seen and taken. ;-)

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  6. I want to be the 'victim' here - willing victim.

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  7. Kiz, shall I give you a number? Or shall we simply say that there is one on almost every street. Tee hee hee

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  8. Is that so? I have also thought about been a willing victim here but, no...if there is one on every street.

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  9. Dunno, Nana F, was only asking a naughty question. Not sure about the one-per-street claim. If you want the number of Miss Trick Call, it is any service provider's root number, plus 419 419 :))

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  10. Ha ha ha. Yeah I'm going to have to agree with Kwegyriba on this one. Why did she have to lie? She should have been able to CLEARLY say what she wanted- minus the theaTRICS!

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  11. haha. this one dei the persona really slacked but really did he. In the end, both parties win.. she gets what she wants and he gets what he didn't ask for. It is a win win situation..Can I be the girl?

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  12. I suspect we've just been given a glimpse of history in these 2 stanzas. Maybe she's been trying to get (with) him for a while without success, and she chose to adopt the sympathy approach on that particular night. Lol

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  13. I do not know if both parties win, since the poem ends prematurely. And, yes, you can be that girl.

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  14. DESPIRATION...

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  15. Yes, Raine, it could be despiration. Maybe it is just a woman's wiles...

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  16. I wonder what the guy did next...? Hmmm

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  17. Well, Raine, maybe there will be a sequel for you. Who knows?

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  18. Nana,
    Please let him know that next time he's not ready for the lies he should give me a buzz!

    i love to be lied to just about mid-night!

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  19. in fact tell him to set an auto call forwarding to me once it's about the mid of night!

    some lies will do!

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  20. Well, Novisi, you know him as much as I.

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  21. So he smells a rat and sees her smile, for sure it was all a pretence to get him there, but he closes the door behind him_ willing party.
    LET THE GAMES BEGIN.

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  22. Hmm, Lucci, is that the ending? A sequel is coming...

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  23. So he was ensnared by the cunning feline? Interestingly he was the willing victim since he knew something was amiss before he made to the flat..Nana Yaw, isn't it fascinating how you get us all to analyze your wonderful pieces?!

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  24. Well, Abena, the story continues...

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  25. What if he was just a trusting samaritan hoping to help out a sister?

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  26. Help her out in her 'neediness', Flossy?

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