Thursday, May 1, 2008

Untitled - Poetry

he offers her his bar stool,
and that makes me smile.
at last, a gentleman!
and then, i catch him,
gazing between her legs.

8 comments:

  1. Anonymous01 May, 2008

    Doesn't this just about sum up the relationship between man and woman? Intrigue and one-upmanship!

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  2. You tell me, Anon, I don't know! Btw, are you a confessing man or a cynical woman? :-)

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  3. What a gentleman he is........hmm Jezebel at work ( the power of a woman, it can make or unmake a man)

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  4. Splashes02 May, 2008

    what a scene!and gentleman we have here. Probably she invited him.

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  5. she must have been wearing a 9 inch skirt

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  6. Welcome to my blog, Kojo. Thanks for reading. Fiction, so I do not know how long it would have been. Got experience in these "sightings"?

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  7. Anonymous13 June, 2008

    hahaha,lmao- that was a good one :-)
    that poem makes me miss you.
    -S

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