They animate a mini lifetime before first light to limber and oil up their looms, twines and bobbins. They have clicked a thousand carols, sinewed unending pretty patterns and woven vivid tales in devastating tapestries by the sonic crack of dawn. It is guiltless gluttony to stop and picture-feed on them if you’re not in a hurry, or simply to play your music sotto voce, as you drive past, roll down your window, prick up your expectant ears and audit this most original orchestra.
Don't you think "animate" is a bit of overkill right at the start of your post?
ReplyDeleteBut I must say "devastating tapestries" is a very 'wicked' phrase. Good work.
Hey Anon,
ReplyDeleteYes, I could have used words like "stir" or "rouse", I admit.
Thanks for the compliment. Much appreciated.
your writing is so vivid and imaginative. love it.
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do i read weave, thread and blend of collours?
Muchas gracias, Muze, I am really trying hard not to overdo it, though.
ReplyDeleteYes, Novisi, but from a distance, the sounds are what captivate me.
ReplyDeletei like this piece. the writing is good,its quite persuasive, makes me think kente weaving is more interesting than it looks.
ReplyDeleteBentuma, I have come to realise that everything is only as interesting as it looks, and everything (no matter its looks) is interesting.
ReplyDeleteYou only need to hone your Second Sight.